THE
JOY OF STORY
John
M. Daniel’s Blog
December 3, 2016
This week’s blog post is a retread,
I confess. I originally wrote the piece for this blog, and I’ve published it
more than once, in this blog and also in print. The reason I’m running it yet
again is that I have just finished rereading, for the… Hell, I don’t remember how many times I’ve read it and
reread it. It’s a novel titled High
Water, written by Richard Bissell and published by Atlantic Monthly Press/Little
Brown in 1954. Having just finished the novel, I can’t think of a better
example of joyful story-telling. By which I don’t mean light and fluffy
feel-good prose, because the story contains a lot of danger and death. I mean
you’ll find acres of joy in Bissell’s fine style. He loves the human voice, and
his dialogue is straight out of the mouths of real working-class people.
Anyway, you may have seen this
article before, in which case you’re excused from class, but I hope you’ll
stick around and give it another read. Consider it an early Christmas present.
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HIS
STRETCH ON THE RIVER
An Appreciation of Richard Bissell
I learned three-quarters of what I know about writing from reading
Richard Bissell, God bless him. —Elmore Leonard
Everyone who calls
himself or herself a writer is asked from time to time, “Who is your favorite
writer?” The writer may be prepared for this interview question and answer the
same way every time, but the truth is more likely less monogamous. The position
of favorite writer may change from year to year, from mood to mood, from book
to book. Perhaps a more insightful question, with a more constant answer, would
be: “Which writer first made you want to be a writer yourself?”
I confess that like
many teenage would-be writers of the 1950s, I imitated Salinger shamelessly. I
also gobbled up Robert Nathan, laughed out loud at Patrick Dennis and Max
Shulman, and was dazzled by Truman Capote. But from the moment I first read
him, the writer who turned me on the most, the one who made writing seem not
only worthwhile, but fun, was Richard Bissell.
Bissell entered my life
by accident. When I was thirteen my older brother gave me the Broadway cast
recording of a musical called The Pajama
Game for Christmas. It was a mistake. That was supposed to go to my Uncle
Hob, who was a huge fan of musical theater. I was supposed to get an EP record
of the Four Freshmen. By the time the mix-up got sorted out, I had listened to The Pajama Game a hundred or so times
and had memorized all the songs, so they were going in my head nonstop whenever
they weren’t filling the house at top volume from the hi-fi.
The brilliant movie of The Pajama Game came out a couple of
years later, and I saw it more than once. This is not a movie review, so I’ll
skip to the point, which is that even at the age of fifteen, I knew I was
hearing a crackerjack screenplay, by George Abbot and Richard Bissell. I was
hooked on this story of blue-collar workers in small-town Iowa, and I resolved
to read 7-1/2¢, the 1953 novel on
which the stage play and movie were based. I bought a paperback copy (the title
on that edition, for copyright or commercial reasons, had been changed to Pajama), and I read it—twice. Forget
Salinger, this was a true-to-life story about genuine people, laced with
important issues (labor relations), sex (Sid and Babe do it, and enjoy doing
it), perfect-pitch dialogue, and laugh-out-loud humor.
That began my devotion
to a writer who influences and delights me to this day. I bought and read all
his books. I still reread his novels every few years, refinding them as fresh,
honest, funny, and original as they were the day they were printed, even though
his “newest” novel is now forty-five years old. I made drive-by pilgrimages to
his homes in Rowayton, Connecticut and Dubuque, Iowa, too shy to ring his
doorbells. I sent him a fan letter after I graduated from college and had
decided, largely thanks to him, to become a writer; but his reply chased me all
over Europe until it got left behind in an American Express in Madrid when I
decided to go to Greece instead, so my hoped-for literary correspondence died
at birth. Over the years I bought multiple copies of his novels in used
bookstores and gave them away to writers and readers I considered worthy of
such gems. Those novels never show up in used bookstores anymore. Maybe because
I bought them all.
I wish I had met
Richard Bissell. I wish I had bought him a drink at his favorite bar in
Dubuque. I wish I could have thanked him. The best I could do was to dedicate
my first published novel to him, by which time he was dead.
Richard Pike Bissell
was born June 27, 1913, in Dubuque, Iowa. He was the second son in a prominent,
wealthy family. His grandfather had made a fortune in the garment business,
manufacturing shirts and pajamas. Young Dick Bissell went to Phillips Exeter
Academy, where he met his future wife, Marian (whom he calls “Frankie” in his
books). He then went on to Harvard, where he majored in anthropology and took
classes from sociologist Pitrim Sorokin (he named the hero of 7-1/2¢ Sid Sorokin, in honor of this
favorite teacher).
After college he became
an ordinary seaman, then worked as a deck hand on riverboats on the
Mississippi, Ohio, and Monongahela Rivers. Eventually he earned a pilot’s license
on the Upper Mississippi, the first writer since Mark Twain to have that
distinction. His novels A Stretch on the
River (1950) and High Water
(1954) draw from his experiences working on tugs and barges on the Mississippi.
A Stretch on the River is the story of Bill Joyce, the second son
in a wealthy family, who decides to forsake high society and sign on as a
deckhand on a Diesel towboat called the Inland
Coal. He finds himself keeping company with hard-working, hard-drinking,
fast-talking, loud-laughing rowdies, not to mention lady friends in port towns
up and down the river. Bissell’s ear for dialogue is brilliant, funny, and
true. He does clearly like the work and the working life of the working
class—this is his own experience he’s writing about, after all—but he doesn’t
romanticize it or downplay the difficulty or the danger. One remarkable chapter
is about the drowning death of a deckhand named Shorty, told almost entirely by
Shorty himself in one long paragraph that goes on for six pages. That may sound
gimmicky, but it’s not. Wallace Stegner included this chapter as a standalone
story in his anthology Great American
Short Stories.
It was in this first
novel that Bissell introduced his fascination for dark-haired, tough-talking
women (or girls, as he was allowed to call them). The woman’s name is Merle in
this novel. In High Water she’s Marie
Chouteau, a flood victim who has lost everything in the disaster, including,
literally, the shirt off her back. In Goodbye,
Ava, she’s Jeri Valentine, a would-be country-western singer-songwriter. In
Bissell’s dreams, the dark lady is Ava Gardner, who haunts his books. As he
says in Say Darling, “I would never
stand in line ten minutes, not even to see Ava Garner in the raw (P.S. I take
that back).”
Not all of Bissell’s
work experience came from the river. He also worked in the family clothing
business, which he called the Sleep Tite Pajama Factory in 7-1/2¢. That novel, his second (and his third book) brought him
fame and fortune in the form of the Broadway musical The Pajama Game, for which Bissell co-wrote the script. The musical in turn formed the basis of
his fourth novel, Say Darling (1957), an affectionate but stinging satire of
the New York show business scene, as seen by a Midwestern hick brought in to
convert a novel into a musical. Say
Darling itself became a musical, and once again Bissell co-wrote the
script.
His next novel, and for
my money his best, was Goodbye, Ava
(1960), set back in Dubuque (called Blue Rock in the book) and back on the river,
this time not on a tugboat but on a houseboat. By this time, Dick and Marian
Bissell were living in a houseboat on the Mississippi, docked at the harbor of
his home town. In Goodbye, Ava Bissell
is at the top of his form, focusing more on the people than on the dangers of
life on the river. Here is a quote thrown into the middle of the novel, spoken
by a character who has no other role in the book than to deliver these choice
words:
“‘They is just a hell
of a difference,’ old Captain Windy Taylor used to say, ‘between listening to
that there so-called news all day long on the radio and reading it all written
down nice in a newspaper. With a newspaper you can get right into them details.
Them details is what counts. Now you take and suppose some onnery bastard takes
and kills his old lady for example. Now that’s just exactly what they will tell
you on the radio that he done. But god damn it less have some details. Now
there’s where your newspaper comes in at. Old newspaper he will tell you just
exactly how the old boy done it, and if he bashed her in with a shovel by God
old newspaper he will tell you the brand name of the shovel. You can just give
me a newspaper every time.’”
While Bissell was
writing fiction, he also contributed travel articles to Holiday and Venture, many
of which were compiled into a humorous nonfiction book called How Many Miles to Galena (1968), about
travels, mainly with his family (he and Marian had four children: Thomas,
Anastasia, Nathaniel, and Samuel) around the U.S.A. Travel was also at the
center of his final novel, Still Circling
Moosejaw (1965), a take-off on big business and international relations,
with a caper that takes off running from New York to Castro’s Cuba to the Upper
Amazon.
In addition to How Many Miles to Galena, Bissell also
wrote four other nonfiction books: The
Monongahela (1952) which he wrote for the Rivers of America Series; You Can Always Tell a Harvard Man (1962),
a light-hearted history of his alma mater; Julia
Harrington (1969), a visual
hodgepodge scrapbook of Midwestern Victoriana; My Life on the Mississippi, Or Why I Am Not Mark Twain (1973), a memoir of growing up on the river;
and New Light on 1776 and All That
(1975), a comic revisionist history
of the American Revolution.
Richard Bissell holds
up well as a travel writer and a writer of comedic nonfiction, but his best
work is his fiction. And his best fiction is found in his four Midwestern
novels, be they on the Mississippi River or in the town he calls Junction City
in 7-1/2¢ and Blue Rock in Goodbye, Ava. Both towns are thinly
disguised versions of Dubuque, where Richard Bissell was born, where he lived
most of his life, and where he died on May 4, 1977. His tombstone, which he
shares with Marian, is a giant granite slab with a map of the Upper Mississippi
carved into it from top to bottom.
No grander epitaph is
necessary, but if there were room, it would be good to see, etched into the
granite, this passage from The
Monongahela:
“To have a river in
your blood, you have to work on her for wages.…Oh, they’re not all bold and
reckless adventurers. A heap of them are as dumb and drab and spiritless as can
be, but in the main they want to go places and do big things out under the sky.
And when the whistle blows and they have to get out and make a lock they cuss
and moan and claim they’re gonna quit. But mostly they stay. That’s the way it
always was on the river, and the way it always will be, until the Monongahela
and the Youghiogheny and the Tygart and the West Branch run dry, and the last
steamboat whistle has echoed back off the hills, filling the valleys with that
mournful music that haunts you wherever you go.”
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Call for submissions: Your 99-Word
Stories
The
deadline for January’s 99-word story submissions is January 1, 2017. The stories
will appear on my blog post for January
14, and will stay posted for a week.
note: this 99-word story feature
is a game, not a contest. Obey the rules and I’ll include your story. I may
edit the story to make it stronger, and it’s understood that you will submit to
my editing willingly. That’s an unwritten rule.
Rules for the 99-word
story feature are as follows:
1. Your story must be 99
words long, exactly.
2. One story per writer,
per month.
3. The story must be a
story. That means it needs plot (something or somebody has to change),
characters, and conflict.
4. The story must be
inspired by the prompt I assign.
5. The deadline: the
first of the month. Stories will appear on this blog the second Saturday of the
month.
6. I will copy edit the
story. The author of the story retains all rights.
THIS
MONTH’S PROMPT FOR NEXT MONTH’S 99-WORD STORY: Write a story
inspired by the following sentence: I
took a trip on a train.
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Calling
all published authors—
I try to feature a guest
author the third Saturday (and week following) of each month. If you’re
interested in posting an essay on my blog—it’s also a chance to promote a
published book—email me directly at jmd@danielpublishing.com.
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