This week I’m pleased and honored to host
mystery author Lesley Diehl. Lesley
retired from her life as a professor of psychology and reclaimed her country
roots by moving to a small cottage in the Butternut River Valley in upstate New
York. In the winter she migrates
to old Florida—cowboys, scrub palmetto, and open fields of grazing cattle, a
place where spurs still jingle in the post office, and gators make golf a
contact sport. Back north, the shy
ghost inhabiting the cottage serves as her literary muse. When not writing, she gardens, cooks
and renovates the 1874 cottage with the help of her husband, two cats, and, of
course, Fred the ghost, who gives artistic direction to their work.
Lesley
is author of several short stories and several mystery series: the microbrewing
mystery series set in the Butternut Valley (A
Deadly Draught and Poisoned Pairings)
and a rural Florida series, Dumpster
Dying and Grilled, Killed and Chilled
(just released by Oak Tree Press).
She recently signed a three-book deal with Camel Press for The
Consignment Shop Murders including A
Secondhand Murder. For
something more heavenly, try her mystery Angel
Sleuth. Several of her short
stories have been published by Untreedreads including one (Murder with All the
Trimmings) in the original Thanksgiving anthology The Killer Wore Cranberry and another (Mashed in the Potatoes) in
the second anthology The Killer Wore
Cranberry: A Second Helping.
She invites readers to visit her on her blog and website.
I asked Lesley to write an article on
what “the joy of story” means to her. She came up with a winner, and in the
process introduced us to her new mystery novel, Grilled, Killed and
Chilled. Here’s what
she has to say:
Creating a New Character in a Series
A Joy for the Reader and the Writer
I fall in love with the characters I
create in my writing. That goes
for my protagonist, her friends, family and those who help her, like Detective
Lewis the police authority who sometimes tries to rescue my protagonist Emily
Rhodes. As fond as I am of people
who appear in my first book in the Big Lake murder mystery series, Dumpster Dying, I like to add characters
because I think readers want to meet new people, and I think this keeps the
story vibrant and fresh. I also
believe creating another person in my protagonist’s life is fun for me as a
writer. It stretches my creative
abilities. When it’s a character
who makes several appearances in the story and adds to the list of suspects,
brings the tension of a competing love interest or broadens the protagonist’s
social sphere, the story takes on a psychological layering beyond that of the
first book. It helps my
protagonist grow, change, develop as a person. Not only can the reader find joy in the story, but so too
can the writer challenged by the development of another character to add to
plot twists and turns.
I’ve been introducing readers to new
characters in my recently released book Grilled,
Chilled and Killed, the second book in the series featuring Emily Rhodes,
retired preschool teacher turned bartender.
In the first book, Emily hired her best
friend’s father as her lawyer not knowing that Lawyer Hap worked out of his
room in the Blue Heron Retirement Home where his exercise regimen included
chasing the nurses and female residents around the place in a wheel chair. Hap has a head of hair that looks like
Albert Einstein’s, prefers to wear a white suit and panama hat, both smelling
as if they were recently packed in mothballs (they were) and exudes plenty of
charm for the ladies.
Emily seems to be cursed with a penchant
for finding dead bodies. This time
the body is in a beer cooler truck at a barbeque festival. Of course, the question we all have is
whether she can keep her sleuthing nose out of this case and let Detective
Lewis do his job. We already know
the answer is no, meaning Emily will get herself into trouble once again and
may need Hap’s lawyerly skills to save her.
In Grilled,
Chilled and Killed Hap has a new lady love, Lorelei Pratt who just happens
to be the sister-in-law of the man Emily discovers dead in the beer cooler
truck. Lorelei is a strong
contender for the killer. Years
back Lorelei’s husband was also found dead, and the authorities suspected she
might have had a hand in his poisoning, but nothing was proved. While she had no motive for killing her
husband, she has one for killing her brother-in-law. She hated him, especially hated the way he treated his wife
Melanie.
Could Lorelei have done the deed? Here are some clues for why Emily
thinks it’s possible.
First at a dinner with others:
Emily decided it was time to get off her Yankee origins and
get back to the murder. “Never mind. You were talking about Everett. How are
you related to him?”
“Melanie
and I married the Pratt brothers. One was a drunk and a womanizer, the other,
my dear departed Charles, the best man in the county. A good provider, loving
husband and father, a good Christian man. Not much to brag about in the sack.
Not like you, huh, Hap?”
Hap
raised his glass in a salute. Lorelei smiled at him, then slid her eyes in
Donald’s direction.
That’s
more than I needed to know, thought Emily, and less than I need to solve this
murder.
“Everett
took after his scallywag of a father and Charles after his mother, a real
gentle soul. Everett was the youngest in the family, the baby and spoiled
rotten.”
“Did
you know he was such a great cook?” asked Emily.
“The
man couldn’t cook his way out of a tunnel with an exit sign pointing toward the
door.”
“He
won a lot of contests to be so bad at it.” Donald signaled the waiter for
another round of drinks, but the waiter dashed by the table without a momentary
sideways glance.
“I’ll
tell you who the cook was. It was Melanie. And I’ll bet the recipe was her
daddy’s. Everett was probably a thief as well as philanderer.” Lorelei slammed
her empty Cosmo glass on the table. “Where’s a darn waiter when you need one?”
Oh,
oh. This wasn’t going to be as easy as she thought. She wanted to talk to
Melanie without Lorelei suspecting Emily had her at the top of the list as a
murder suspect. Maybe she’d go at it another way, the way a Yankee with no manners
would.
“Here’s
my theory about the murder. I think one of his uh, women, did him in, probably
got tired of waiting for him to get rid of Melanie or got jealous of one of his
other women. Doesn’t that seem possible?
I’d sure like to know what Melanie thinks about this whole thing, but
Detective Lewis wants to see the motive as related to barbeque competition.”
Emily sat back in her chair and watched the reaction on Lorelei’s face.
“Why
wouldn’t you think of the wife first?
Isn’t that what all the television shows say? You wouldn’t be wanting to back poor Melanie into a corner
and pin this murder on her, would you?” Lorelei’s hazel eyes took on the color
of storm clouds.
That’s
a possibility, thought Emily, but she shook her head and tried to look shocked
at such an idea.
“I
met Melanie the night of the murder. She sure didn’t seem like a woman who had
just killed her husband. She appeared to be in shock to me.”
Lorelei
nodded in agreement. “Just so.”
Then
at the country club:
“Where do you fit in this, Lorelei?”
“I
know Melanie didn’t poison him because she saw the hell I went through when I
was accused of killing my husband. Not only is Melanie not a violent person,
she’s seen firsthand what false accusations do to a family. She’d never do that to her family. Not
Melanie.”
Emily
gulped. “You were accused…”
“My
first husband died under suspicious circumstances. They never found the cause
of death, but the authorities suspected me although they never brought charges.
I finally moved away from Milledgeville. I’m sure your friend Daisy told you
all this. She must have recognized me.”
“Uh,
no. She didn’t.” Emily kicked herself for not insisting Daisy tell her about
Lorelei.
“Anyway.
Here.” Lorelei handed Emily a piece of paper with several names written on it.
“You can get the jump on your detective friend. Between you and your detective
friend, I like you better. I’m not fond of cops after what the authorities put
me through with my husband’s death. Besides, women need to stick together.”
Lorelei
got up from the booth without another word and wandered back to the bar where
she and Donald took up their conversation where they’d left off. Soon the two
of them were laughing. He reached over several times and patted Lorelei’s
shoulder.
The
woman certainly was full of surprises. She had to be twenty years older than
Donald, yet she exuded a sexual attraction as alluring as a minnow for a fish.
Emily dropped her glance to the paper in her hand. Five names. Emily raised her
eyes to the twosome at the bar. She wondered if those were the only women
Everett pursued.
Is
Lorelei being too helpful, too sympathetic to Melanie’s plight, and too willing
to provide a list of suspects for Emily to track down? Perhaps so. You know how I like to write about treacherous women.
Suspicious? Helpful? Octogenarian sex pot?
You decide about Lorelei.
Do you like stories in which new
characters appear or do you prefer the cast to remain the same from book to
book? What adds to your joy in the
story?
Lesley,
ReplyDeleteI know exactly what you mean about falling in love with the characters you create. Emily and the other characters in "Dumpster Dying" and "Grilled, Chilled and Killed" are fantastic! Loved the books!
Hey, Lesley, nice to read about you again. I like all kinds of stories. As a write of two series, I want to find out what my characters are up to--and feel the same about characters in other authors' series.
ReplyDeleteGreat interview, you two. I also love creating characters, Lesley, especially seniors, who are so much more interesting than their younger counterparts. I enjoy reading about your own.
ReplyDeleteThanks for an entertaining article on characters. I especially like your titles, Leslie, something I'm weak at. Mysteries are fun to write, I'm sure and even more fun to read.
ReplyDeleteSounds good! I was a big fan of Poisoned Pairings (see my Amazon review), so I'll be looking forward to giving this a read.
ReplyDeleteThis. Is. Fantastic. Well done, just like your books Lesley. Characters illicit the emotions we want from our readers so knowing how to create them and keep them fresh is vital. Great topic John and wonderful response Lesley.
ReplyDeleteChris
First, I love meeting new characters, and you introduce them so well. I truly enjoyed this book (all of them, actually) and I appreciate the little bits of humor you include. Wonderful post!
ReplyDeleteMarja McGraw
Loved your post, Lesley! I too love meeting new characters--getting to know them! Looking forward to reading Grilled, Chilled, and Killed (I'm pretty much a Kindle reader these days)--great title by the way!
ReplyDeleteMadeline
Meeting up with known characters is always nice. Reading about them in new situations and interacting with different characters helps to keep them fresh and even more alive, unless they are killed off of course! Fun post. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad all of you liked my new character, Lorelei Pratt. Let me share a secret about her. I took her name from a bar and restaurant in the Florida Keys. Out front of the place there is a carving of a woman who looks like a sea nymph or siren. I thought it was an appropriate name for Mrs. Pratt. She may be a senior, but the gal has appeal.
ReplyDeleteLove that book title! Very clever. Yes, I believe an author has to love the characters or maybe really hate them if they're bad guys. If we don't feel a connection when we write, the readers won't either.
ReplyDeleteMorgan Mandel
http://www.chicklitfaves.com
Great post Lesley! When you love your characters, it shines through on the pages just like yours do. Great job.
ReplyDeleteWendy
W.S. Gager on Writing
Seem like characters I want to meet. Good read.
ReplyDeleteAnd, in a way, I love my bad guys too, especially my bad boy cop. He's just so despicable and pathetic you've got to feel sad for him because none of the plots he hatches work out.
ReplyDeleteLove this article, Lesley. I'll be getting to know Emily real well as I travel to CA this week; she's inside my Kindle, in Dumpster Dying. I'm sure I'll want to read this new book very soon. Thanks so much!
ReplyDeleteThanks for all your good words about my characters. I've had fun writing them and love the setting here in rural Florida. I attended an arts festival this weekend and sold some books. It got me revved up all over again about my stories set here in Big Lake country.
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