I’m pleased to say there
were more real stories in this batch of submissions. That means in what you
read below you’ll find people making choices and changing. That’s good
progress.
Now I’m going to throw
out a bigger challenge, because I know you’re ready for it. For next month’s
blog, the deadline will be August 1, and here’s what I want from you, whoever
you are (the invitation is open to all):
Write a 99-word autobiographical story based on either of the
following favorite fairy tales: “Cinderella,” or “The Ugly Duckling.” You may
write from any point of view, and set the story in any time frame. But don’t
just retell the fairy tale. Write a story from your own life.
Yes, this is a harder assignment, but it will be more fun, and what
you come up with will be a fine and important story. Remember the basic rule of
story: Something happens to somebody.
I look forward to reading and posting whatever you send me!
Meanwhile, here’s July’s post, an explosion of colorful stories about
FIREWORKS—
•••
FIREWORKS
by Ann Bruno
July is a glorious
month when we celebrate our independence. It is a month of picnics, barbeques
and fireworks.
When our children
were young we took them to Washington, DC to see the fireworks. We sat on the
lawn at the foot of the Washington Monument and watched the fireworks. We were
in awe, it seemed that the entire sky lit up with the most beautiful colors and
shapes. It was such a spectacular display to behold. The look on my children's
faces was full of awe. I have never seen a more beautiful array of fireworks
than in Washington, DC.
•••
ILLUMINATION
by Marie Rose Elias
Catholic school failed helping me know God.
He was not in my home or present in my daily upbringing.
Dysfunctional kids chose to visit the park—our
tithes having bought chocolate.
Adult with misguided vanities while raising
children alone became excuse enough for not searching for God. I was busy
working, socializing.…Looking for a husband takes time.
Somehow I knew something was missing within. I
walked into worship three years ago, something grabbed hold of my heart! His love
burst forth in my heart like explosion!
Independence Day! Tears of joy, to be home!
•••
FIRECRACKERS
by June Kosier
It was June the 15th and I hadn’t gotten any firecrackers yet.
As a member of the Daughters of the American
Revolution, I just love anything patriotic. I especially love the red color of
firecrackers. It perturbs me though that something patriotic and so American
comes from Mexico.
I had been to several places and none of them had
any firecrackers. Well I had one last place to try.
•••
FIREWORKS
by Denise
Dreany
At fifteen
Jack had a crush on her but he couldn’t speak. She was disappointed.
He went into
the army and when he returned, love had lost its meaning. Gone. He moved away. He
had a good life, a job, a house, but he lived alone.
After her
marriage and divorce she looked for him. She found him in the country. In
celebration, they tossed sparklers into the air to watch them swirl and spin in
the darkness. He heard the sounds of distant guns and the hiss of falling
bombs. The sky lit up.
Jack was
fifteen again.
•••
FIREWORKS
by Anthony Karavias
Fireworks come in different colors and a
variation of displays. The colors are mostly red, white, and blue, as is the
American flag—Red for valor, White for purity, Blue for justice. With these
colors in stripes, and stars on a field of blue, Old Glory to me, means
independence.
When I married my wife it was red, an act of
valor (spirit of love). She was appropriately in white for purity. It was justice
for me to have perseverance—and besides, blue is my favorite color.
I scooped up my wife, and since then we are
still flying high.
•••
OVERCOMING NATURE’S FIREWORKS
by Jerry Giammatteo
A storm was approaching. Nervously, I sat on the
enclosed porch overlooking Long Island Sound. Thick, foreboding clouds presaged
the gathering darkness.
There was a faraway flash of lightning and a rumble
of thunder; then another, a little closer; and another, closer still. Though
only 7:30, the sky was suggesting midnight.
Finally, a bolt illuminated the porch and
terrifying blasts shook our bungalow. I wanted to flee to my bedroom, but
steeled myself. Torrents of rain fell.
Then, it was over. I walked into the house
relieved, having taken nature’s best shot. I was respectful, but no longer
frightened.
•••
THE EIGHTH STEP
by Kinga Hosszu
There are seven steps to making a firecracker. Steve had memorized
them all. He’d made over a thousand in his fifteen years; a good business for
extra cash.
But this one he’d keep. The biggest one ever.
He swept the gunpowder into a thimble and secured the fuse with tape.
“This will be the mother of all bangs,” he thought as he rested it
against some books.
He didn’t see Mittens jump. He only saw the firecracker tumble toward
the ground, and Steve lunged, but clawed through empty air.
Then he saw the flash.
He never heard the bang.
•••
FIREWORKS— A MEMORIAL
by Rita Kushner
The cruise on the QE2 to
Bermuda was to be our second forever honeymoon.
Toasting with glasses held high on the upper deck, we
cheered the barges alongside, displaying a magnificent shower of
fireworks, sparkling colors in great majesty, a not-to-forget performance.
And I truly have never forgotten. No sooner had we sailed under the
great span of the Verazzano Bridge into the dark, roiling waters of an
angry Atlantic Ocean when demonic, nauseating motion-sickness overcame me
and continued throughout this disastrous voyage.
The trigger for this desperate memory is the magnificent, fantastic
MACY'S JULY FOURTH FIREWORKS EXTRAVAGANZA!
•••
FIREWORKS
by Elaine Polson Shiber
by Elaine Polson Shiber
She
hated the Fourth of July. Waking up to that dreaded noise, knowing she’d have
to watch while the big twelve-year-olds lit cherry bombs, two-inchers, and
more; and they ran while she hid. She feared she might lose a finger or an eye,
or even die. She was five.
She
liked the snakes that oozed quietly, and when it got dark, the sparklers.
Now
she goes to concerts on the Fourth and claps in time to the “Stars and Stripes
Forever,” and oohs and aahs at the fireworks exploding above
her head.
She’s
one of the big kids now. She’s fifty-seven.
•••
FIREWORKS
BY
Eric Shyman, Ed.D.
The
fireworks boom. I look to my son.
The
fireworks boom again. I look to my dog.
On
the third boom, my wife and I look at each other.
To
us, we have two babies, both braver than we could ever expect. We smile, place
the marshmallows on the ends of our sticks, and continue to watch as our son
alternates his gaze from the lit-up sky to the flaming white puff. He claps,
says “mmm mmm marshmallow,” takes a bite when it cools and gives the rest to
the dog. “Say ‘mmm mmm,’ Dixie.”
Dixie
continues to chew.
•••
Yay, John! How nice to celebrate the 4th by receiving this latest Joy of Story -- and with seven of my students (from three different writing workshops)displaying their work. Thanks again for providing this venue for aspiring and professional writers. How about getting the whole Posse to contribute! That could be fun. Happy 4th to you and yours. XXX
ReplyDeleteThanks, Eileen. Of course I'd be pleased to receive stories from as many members of the Posse (deputies?) as want to send them!
DeleteWhat a great idea, John, and I like your writing lead for next month too!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lesley. I hope you'll send me a story.
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